Editing Leads & 2nd Paragraph

Katherine Mitchell
2 min readMar 15, 2021

Leads Exercise:

Board of Education Meeting

Who: Assistant superintendent Max Hoemmeldorfer

What: Enrollment is dropping the third consecutive year

Where: School Board of Education meeting

When: Thursday night

For the third consecutive year, the enrollment at Hattiesburg School is dropping by the hundreds, and the assistant superintendent reported the bleak announcement at the Board of Education meeting Thursday night.

“This is the third year we’ve lost enrollment,” Assistant Superintendent Max Hoemmeldorfer said. ‘The future looks bleak.”

Faculty in Plane Crash

Who: Associate professor of rural sociology, John Dumont, and Associate professor of English, George Johnson.

What: Five people were killed

Where: Kennedy International Airport

When: Thursday night

Why: Jet had a failed takeoff

How: TWA jet crashed

Five passengers killed in failed jet takeoff Thursday night at the Kennedy International Airport, and the plane included two members of the faculty from Blackwater University.

The Associate professor of rural sociology, John Dumont, and the Associate professor of English, George Johnson, were both on the plane when it crashed.

Meeman Speaks

Who: Norman Meeman, author and winner of Pulitzer Prize

What: Spoke to 67, mostly English students

Where: William Oxley Thomson Memorial Library in Room 111

When: Sunday at 4:30 p.m.

Why: To teach students about the writing process of a Pulitzer Prize winning book

How: Won the Pulitzer prize for his book My Life as Far as It Goes

A Pulitzer Prize winning author made controversial statements to 67 English students at the William Oxley Thomson Memorial Library Sunday as he gave them advice on writing.

Norman Meeman, author of My Life as Far as It Goes, held a session on his approach to the writing processes that resulted in his Pulitzer Prize winning piece.

Professor Wins Award

Who: George Washington Honor Medal winners

What: Clement Crabtree professor of horticulture announced as winner

Where: Ceremony in Pennsylvania

When: last week

Why: the professor from Crabtree wrote an essay called “Plan for Peace”

How: The Freedoms Foundation at Valley Forge held an award ceremony

Horticulture professor from Clement Crabtree announced as George Washington Honor Medal winner as the Freedoms Foundation at Valley Forge held an award ceremony in Pennsylvania last week.

Professor John Doe won a medal due to his essay trying to jump start the distribution of flower seeds to foreign nations.

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